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please critique posted by cellos December 28, 2008 07:47AM reply | quote
posted by cellos
Hi i just got a lensbaby composer for christmas. I'd welcome some feedback.
Re: please critique posted by BearWoodsDavid December 28, 2008 11:17AM reply | quote
posted by BearWoodsDavid

I especially like the last one. It has a great look of movement to it. Nice colors too.
David

David Akoubian
www.bearwoodsphotography.com

"Time is a wonderful healer, but a really bad beautician" - Unknown
Re: please critique posted by RichB December 28, 2008 12:32PM reply | quote
posted by RichB

I am with David on #4 being my favorite also in this series. Love the blurred blending of colors.


Rich
Re: please critique posted by jbrunjes December 28, 2008 11:17PM reply | quote
posted by jbrunjes

Welcome to the forum. Here are a few thoughts. Please take my criticism with the knowledge that I am not a pro but have heard similar comments about my photos from others here.

Shot #1 - The bright spot at the top left distracts the eye from your lb sweet spot.

I like #2 as an abstract. I would oversaturate the colors for greater impact.

#3 - My eyes are drawn to the bottom of the picture and not the flower.

#4 - Like the motion. This is another that I would over saturate. I would also try to diminish the large grey spot (mid-left). It stops my eyes from moving to the right.

Hope this helps.
Joby

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